Take a Moment #In Tandem 13

Posted: October 5, 2011 in Ramblings of a sober Poet
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And when the day ends
and Peak time traffic runs down the city’s tarred face.
When the sidewalks become alive
and carry sleepwalkers back to
the reality of home.
When worker ants drown in exhaust fumes
and feel their way through the concrete maze.
Will you take a moment
and look at the beautiful sky?

 ©Richard Quaz Roodt(2011)

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This poem is linked to d’Versepoets.com  OpenLink Night15   and  In Tandem 

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Comments
  1. JInksy says:

    Thank you for that lifting of the spirits – and eyes- at the end of a working day. I can so identify with that feeling, after working in an office for years.
    I used to dawdle on the last part of my homeward journey to do exactly that. You see, I had to walk through a couple of alleyways, and the sky was always framed at the end of them, and my footsteps often came to a halt while I marvelled at a skyscape.
    Thanks for joining the Tandem again. ♥

  2. kez says:

    cool we so often forget to look at the obvious beauty around us ….loved this thank you x

  3. Exactly as I have always viewed us at the end of our days, sleepwalkers and worker ants returning to their nests……

  4. Beautiful watercolor and great poem. I just recently posted a poem along the same lines entitled “Worker Ants”–great minds, I guess!

  5. brian miller says:

    we should more you know…so much beauty missed in our busy-ness…thanks for making us pause tonight…

  6. Heaven says:

    A nice reminder to look up for the lovely sky….beautiful picture too ~

  7. ayala says:

    We have to take the time and watch the beauty around us. Nice!

  8. tashtoo says:

    A wonderful write! Love the image…so sorry I’ve been missing InTandem lately. Jinksy rocks! Thought the soothing image the perfect accompaniment to your words (and warning…take the time to look!)

  9. the word bar says:

    I love the sky and have so many beautiful pictures I have taken.. especially clouds..
    beautiful words here

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