Yes!

Posted: February 2, 2012 in Ramblings of a sober Poet
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I survived
Dragged myself off the battlefield
Broken and bruised

Licking wounds
The taste of depression lingers.
A loveless King
on a throne of self pity

Flashes of us before the wars.
You and I in a field of yellow flowers.
Happy and ready to rule our tomorrow.

Would I go back?
Yes; without a second thought.

This Poem is linked to PoetsUnited(ThursdayThinkTank)

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Comments
  1. Ruth says:

    This is what I call beautiful poetry, Quaz – the kind one can’t just stand in the door of…

    A loveless King
    on a throne of self pity

    and oh, if only we could go back to the innocence of ‘before’, of

    You and I in a field of yellow flowers.

  2. You really paint beautiful pictures with your words. This feels like a song.

  3. ~L says:

    you know… sometimes when asked to go back and change something… my first reactions is yes yes yes I would change it… but then I would not have my kids, or be where I am, or write the way I do… or have a heart for the brokenhearted like I do… Your poem made me think about where I have come and how even though it’s painful I would not give up the loves I have now… even though it sounds a bit crazy to me…

    rambling on I go:) lol

    Your poems bring depth to this girl:)

    ~L

  4. Heaven says:

    Beautiful words…i like the scene of yellow flowers ~

  5. Ella says:

    I love the yellow flowers, the sunshine moment of love! It was beautiful and sad~
    Yes, I loved it~

  6. David King says:

    The finale took me by surprise – and all the better for it.

  7. meiro says:

    this is so beautiful, love it
    blessed be.

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